Query Letters

Colleen Lindsay, agent at Fine Print (the same agency that has the infamous Janet Reid), posted today a copy of a query letter that worked for her with comments on what was done well. Then, the author, Kelly Gay, posted the same query letter on her blog with her own comments. It's pretty interesting to get the two different view points on the same letter--why Kelly wrote it, and why Colleen liked it. Especially interesting for me as she's going to be getting a query from me in September, after revisions :)