Saturday, April 12, 2008

Oh, crap!

Of course, after I send a requested partial out to an agent, I have a flash of inspiration to add in another scene in Babbletongue that shows more of Mina's past in the first chapter and shows how she was using her power without realizing it in order to get her strange living conditions. I explain later, around page 70 or so, but it will work so much better sooner on.

Just when you think you've got something polished to perfection, there's always something new to add!
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