tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post3568430483280185690..comments2024-02-27T07:05:52.851-05:00Comments on Beth Revis: Your Simple Rules to Grammar, part 2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11431700962951592287noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-55220744159211405672012-12-08T17:24:49.629-05:002012-12-08T17:24:49.629-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Susan Vanderbilt (Irfan Aleem) (Ray)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04049696195704128343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-32495685981064536992012-12-08T17:20:37.088-05:002012-12-08T17:20:37.088-05:00Very interesting... and yes, very simple. But, I d...Very interesting... and yes, very simple. But, I do have a thought/question to put forth... when writing something like... say poetic type text, like a simple paragraph or so of thoughts that blend together... how do you seperate them? <br />I'm asking because I find myself writing a bit, and the reason I really don't submit the works or consider publishing them is because I know that "gramatically" they wouldn't be 'properly' written. . . so do the rules apply only in formal writings? and if they need to be applied to a persons certain 'style' of writing how do you do that without changing the flow or rythme of the piece? Susan Vanderbilt (Irfan Aleem) (Ray)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04049696195704128343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-28417860558325856462012-08-29T18:08:56.533-04:002012-08-29T18:08:56.533-04:00Thanks so much for posting this, Beth. I've en...Thanks so much for posting this, Beth. I've enjoyed looking over the simple-to-follow rules you've established.<br />I have one question for you (I often confuse myself because I overanalyze all my writing, so just know it's not that you didn't explain yourself well because you did). <br /><br />In the case of rule #5. I usually find myself not wanting to repeat the noun with a pronoun and I wondered if that is right/wrong and what you think about it. For example if I were to write:<br /><br />Mark sat on the bleachers and laughed at the cheerleaders.<br /><br />How wrong is that? It seems more like rule #2 now except for the addition of the cc. (p.s. I didn't place a comma in front of the cc because I don't in my regular writing life and I wanted to know if it was wrong.)<br /><br />Thanks for any answers/help you have! I love these Writing Wednesday posts.Samanthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10089538926880960455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-75919654889660555302012-05-28T10:33:46.496-04:002012-05-28T10:33:46.496-04:00I love this - so easy to remember and so handy to ...I love this - so easy to remember and so handy to refer to! More grammar tips please ;)VikLithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12675200811539358961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-56097714014811890872011-05-09T09:36:56.825-04:002011-05-09T09:36:56.825-04:00You know, I wish my teacher had used the poo fling...You know, I wish my teacher had used the poo flinging monkey example. That would have been burned into my brain for all eternity. These examples are so helpful!Mindyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11660896035844524781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-47243087465774263662009-07-28T17:12:57.843-04:002009-07-28T17:12:57.843-04:00You mind punching my line editor in the face? Sinc...You mind punching my line editor in the face? Since, you know, she's just decided to take out 90% of the commas she sees?<br /><br />/grumbleThe Screaming Guppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16962615828294805869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-11821670181495913562009-06-09T07:22:49.081-04:002009-06-09T07:22:49.081-04:00I gave up halfway through the first post. I got th...I gave up halfway through the first post. I got the first half of it, and then I failed. I think I'm just unteachable. I can't split a sentence in to parts, to me it's just a sentence. This is all down to years of schooling. They have made me analyse EVERYTHING to the point where breaking down anything else just seems like a lot of work. I might have another go at commas. Great posts :)Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06206364178630503002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-37892655437285351172009-06-08T21:46:18.744-04:002009-06-08T21:46:18.744-04:00Glad you all liked! :) And glad it's not too c...Glad you all liked! :) And glad it's not too confusing. I'm a very interactive teacher, so I was worried this wouldn't translate too well in writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11431700962951592287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-40960089482608214242009-06-08T18:05:27.723-04:002009-06-08T18:05:27.723-04:00You are awesome, you know that, Beth?
*has sinkin...You are awesome, you know that, Beth?<br /><br />*has sinking feeling she just flubbed some serious grammar*<br /><br />These posts have been so helpful. Thanks!Danyelle L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10366276085080565870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-15313986471163628022009-06-08T17:30:21.293-04:002009-06-08T17:30:21.293-04:00This is great! I try to tell my students that the...This is great! I try to tell my students that they should be thrilled when we do a grammar lesson because there are rules to follow ... rules that make sense (unlike whether or not an essay's introduction is effective and engaging or something else that has a subjective element). Naturally, they don't listen to me. Sigh ...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13955854427063032485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-68342472775902481722009-06-08T14:48:50.270-04:002009-06-08T14:48:50.270-04:00Hug, hug, hug, hug! Thanks for doing this. I loves...Hug, hug, hug, hug! Thanks for doing this. I loves you for doing this. You know I do! My English teacher really bothers you and me too! I can look up her phone number and give her a piece of my mind. HMM, think I'll do that. :)Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-56834471886379983202009-06-08T11:38:53.781-04:002009-06-08T11:38:53.781-04:00PJ: I think, in Gaiman's case at least, it'...PJ: I think, in Gaiman's case at least, it's a matter of style, much like Cormac McCarthy chooses not to use, well....nothing much but periods.<br /><br />Do I think it's a sign of GOOD style? No. Although I think that what Gaiman's trying to do is create immediacy and urgency (much like many writers use with present tense). However, I also think it's a bit of lazy writing, and doesn't really improve the style.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11431700962951592287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-75407277761750294292009-06-08T11:12:46.900-04:002009-06-08T11:12:46.900-04:00I've never seen it put so simply before. *Hea...I've never seen it put so simply before. *Heart*Casey Somethinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596079290053524103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-10085021007062771062009-06-08T11:08:20.750-04:002009-06-08T11:08:20.750-04:00I've been really noticing punctuation these da...I've been really noticing punctuation these days in my writing and the writing of others. I think while reading The Graveyard Book, I brought up the subject of commas (or the author's lack thereof), and asked the husband about it. His thoughts were that though the comma is normally used in the "IC, cc IC." case, it is not required.<br />So there were tons of "IC cc IC." cases with no comma.<br /><br />Your thoughts?PJ Hooverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02602205868934777662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7164206822403278866.post-61725347559283149832009-06-08T10:20:08.059-04:002009-06-08T10:20:08.059-04:00Beth, I love you. This is so easy, and yet I'v...Beth, I love you. This is so easy, and yet I've always struggled with commas. Thank you for doing these posts.Joyce Wolfleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078785682731583178noreply@blogger.com